cephaikus

WK, you are correct, sir! Flak is the correct spelling of the anti aircraft air exploding projectile guns...the brits also called it "ak-ak" (jeez, sounds like the martians from Mars Attacks)
Great poetry...always brings a grin to my sunburned face!
Greg
 
TaningiaDanae
slow to produce her lost work :P
behold my old one


Skulking through the sand
An underwater Shiva
Stronger than a tongue

odd.....i thought that last line was "strong, like a tongue" oh well i guess i change it back

Skulking through the sand
An underwater Shiva
strong, like a tongue


any opinions on which is better?

:cthulhu: :heart: :beer:
 
that could have been the reason i changed it..... of course itd be just like me to just throw a junk qualifier like 'much' in front of 'like'
 
Less flak than missile
A Mesonychoteuthis
Screams across the sea

Thinking it the moon
Writhing kraken love and die
'Neath the lighthouse arc

O'Shea sows suspense
A Tasmanian Devil
Lurks outside his room
 
Alas, tempt me not
Distraction most foul, most fair
I've research to do!

Yet, looking over
At Teuth slumped in his desk chair...
Steve-O needs coffee.

Something stinks in here
Is it squid? Garbage? Steve? No...
The kitty did it.

Stomachs growl madly
Lunchtime irony: so much
Squid, so little food.

(These remind me of
A summer I spent birding
But mostly writing.)

O Giant Squid, how
Canst thou be so intriguing
And yet so stupid?
 

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